Monday, January 08, 2007

Nerd shirts

heya, um, i was just wondering, what ever happened to the idea of us getting the nerd shirts, the one with the : nerdicity; its a nerd thing, or the one about surviving Nerd and Sir, and all we got are the lousy shirts. i really hope we do this shirt thing. n e who. this was on one of Ery's posts i believe.

n e who, i though of another nerd word... Nerdilicious, used in a sentence: i am feeling very nerdilicious today!. :-)

back 2 school

heya my fellow nerds,
the semester was crazy i'm sure, but we have come to the beginnign of a new one, and i do hope to see you all next year. good job, and congratulations to you all for surviving the first sememester of the Honor's scholar's programm. now u personally have an idea of what to expect. wish u all well for your next semester, and pray that u all succeed and not loose to much sleep.
1 love. :-)

Sunday, December 24, 2006

Luau Pictures

Here are some pictures from the end-of-semester-luau (click the title of the post). :)

Saturday, December 02, 2006

End-of-Semester Luau

The end of the sememester is approaching rapidly, and we have not yet planned (or at least I'm not aware of you planning) the end-of-semester luau. What you all need to do is pick a date and time (preferably Wednesday or Thursday – ideally, after your last Honors exam), and I'll print out some flyers to hand out to everyone. So, let me know, so that we can get the word out!

Friday, December 01, 2006

New Information!

Dr. Bradley posted this ditty on his blog. GO AND READ IT. The article by Bill Hooker will REALLY HELP aid your research.

How to Read a Journal Podcast

Here are the notes from today's class on how to analyze a journal article. You are expected to read this article and continue questioning the data. We will talk about it more on Tuesday.

Podcast

Some key analytical steps for journal reading:

1. Read the "abstract" first. What is the author planning to argue about? What is the premise of the argument?

2. Read the "introduction." This will include relevant research about the topic. Is there a bias? If so, can you still use this material? Are the sources current? Is the foundation clear? This is where the "secondary research" will be provided.

3. Read the "methodology" section. What methods were used? Is the sample reliable? Are the research efforts reliable, suitable, and comprehensive? This will be where "primary" research will be outlined. A study is only as good as its methods...

4. Read the "results." Are the results reliable? Do the results match the methods used to gather the data? Is there enough evidence (statistically) to prove the thesis?

5. Read the "discussion." This section meshes the primary and secondary research. Does the discussion accurately reflect and comment upon the primary and secondary research?

6. Read the "conclusion." What does the author say to sum up the work? What final statements does the author make about the topic?

7. Read the "recommendations." Almost all research studies recommend further study. What does the author suggest should happen next?

Tuesday, November 28, 2006

Open Chemistry and Traditional Chemistry Screencast

Hey Nerds:

I am giving a presentation on Wednesday night on my research on Open and Traditional Chemistry; here is a link to the screencast:

Screencast (open in Internet Explorer)

Wednesday, November 22, 2006

Picture-aholic

Hi my name is jenni and i'm addicted to photographs! I hope everyone enjoys them!!!! :)

The Great Debate!



Oh the Games we Play!




Halloween Party!




This is what honors students do when their class gets cancelled!


Smile for the Camera!



What would we do without Brad???


Spaghetti Dinner



Persuasive Writing Notes

First, many thanks to Miss Jenni for the pics :-)

Here are the lecture notes (including your Latin lesson). The PPT file is here.

Tuesday, November 21, 2006

The Honors Scholars Trip to CVS




Mentos and Coke!!!!!



Thursday, November 16, 2006

Sanofi-Aventis Interview

Hello Everyone!

I must say that I was VERY proud of the questions you asked in today's interview. I believe you all demonstrated sophisticated interviewing techniques, and I was impressed by the quality of your questions. Thank you, Candice, for getting us connected! Also, we are greatly indebted to Beverly Benfer for allowing us the use of the FIT. Her flexibility was truly helpful in meeting our needs.

Our interview with Kim Ashman, Director of Quality and Compliance at Sanofi-Aventis, is located as an MP3 file here.

NERD

Wednesday, November 15, 2006

Interview

Hey guys....just a quick update. Since some of you indicated that the interview would still be helpful, we will have it either tomorrow (Thursday) or next Tuesday. It will probably be next Tuesday, but just in case it is tommorow, try to have one or two questions prepared to ask. They don't have to be complicated; just ask whatever you think will help you understand things better for this drug paper or our final research paper (keeping in mind that this is a private/corporate company). TTYL.

Saturday, November 11, 2006

Weekend Update

Hey Nerdettes:

Pizza was a blast. Thank you for taking the opportunity to meet with me to talk about class. I thought it was a productive experience, and we should do it again (soon, but not for a few weeks...heehee).

As promised, I set up a student research wiki for all of you to dump information. I added a link for your Sociology class, too. Please feel free to add spaces to this site for other classes, as well. This is your space. Use it as much as you can to aid you in your research.

Also, I have started on the mid-term evals. I have half finished. Unfortunately, federal law prohibits me from emailing you anything associated to grades. SOOOooooo...on Tuesday, I will meet with each of you during class (while the rest of you have time to use the computers). Also, I am adding in comments to the wiki posts you have made so far. These will be done (hopefully) by Sunday night, so go in and check your comments.

You will receive a big ole packet on Tuesday with all kinds of information. We will go over this on Thursday, so you will need to read it. I will be creating a wiki with parts of it, but some parts can not be put up on the wiki because of copyright.

Finally, I have considered everything you have communicated to me (either directly or through Mr. Sponsler). You should feel free, at any time, to express concerns to me directly. In the spirit of fairness, we will be instituting "Ben the TA" or his assistant, "Louie the Troll." They will help make sure everyone has an equal voice in class (trust me...).

Friday, November 10, 2006

Drug Process

Hey Everyone....this is Candice.

I just wanted to let all of you know that my dad is still working on setting up an interview with the Senior Manager of Oncology and Internal Medicine at Sanofi-Aventis (where my dad works) for our paper. But until then, here is a link to a video that you should find helpful for your research.

http://en.sanofi-aventis.com/minisites/video/clip_histoire_medicament/play_wmv_en.asp

I will also send an e-mail to everyone with a pdf document that has more information on the drug process.

Hope you have a great weekend!

Tuesday, October 31, 2006

Announcements and Such

Thanks, very much, for coming to court today. I hope it was an interesting experience (Jenny, I hope you are OK...I hope your tire is all mended, too).

Mr. Sponsler was kind enough to give me an update about where you are and what your concerns are at this point. I have asked him to discuss these issues with you again, and I am posting my thoughts here as a guide, as well.

1. Academic Journals: We WILL be using academic journals in our research. Prior to my leave, we focused on web research (until the completion of the workbook). I start here because students usually surf the web first. We then move onto journal articles (as Mr. Sponsler has instructed). For the research paper, I require 10 sources. 5 of those sources must be peer reviewed. We will cover this again upon my return, but Mr. Sponsler can also guide you toward helpful resources.

2. In your research paper, I want you to defend a thesis statement that you can, through documentation and analysis, support. This means that you may weigh in on the issue from any perspective. You may find, through your research, that Open Source Science will not impact developing nations. This IS an acceptable position. You may find that it might if X and Y happen. This is an acceptable position. Or, you may find that OSS will, indeed, impact developing nations in new and better ways. This is an acceptable position. As I stated in class (and I GENUINELY mean this), I have no right or wrong answer in mind. I want you to gather material, assess that material, and come to a conclusion based on the information you have gathered.

3. Statistics: I think I may have confused you in my presentation of usuable statistics and sources. If you are using statistics, they should be as current as possible (three years is a good number). However, other materials (definitions, initial studies, etc.) can be older. For example, if you are researching Freud, you will want to get his original ideas (and they are certainly older than three years). In some cases, data is no longer collected, and so you have to use the last available sample (and that may be older than 3 years). So, the three year rule only applies to CURRENT statistics (not definitions or foundational ideas). I hope that helps.

4. Mr. Sponsler will be meeting with you Thursday to review MLA. THIS IS AN IMPORTANT LECTURE. As he may have told you, we do not allow errors in MLA formatting or documentation. Any errors will result in automatic failure. This isn't my rule; this is an English division policy.

I will likely be back Tuesday or Thursday. I can't wait to see you!

Sunday, October 29, 2006

Class Notes and Catch Up!

Hey Nerdillios:

This is a catch up post and is quite lengthy. Please read the entire post, and answer the questions at the end by hitting "comment."

Announcements:

1. I am in still in court, but I anticipate being done by next Tuesday or Thursday (or earlier).

2. I have graded a whole host of work, and I will be dropping it off for Mr. Sponsler to return to you on Thursday.

3. I understand that many of you are coming to court on Tuesday. I think it will be a great opportunity for you to see justice in action. There are a few rules of court, though, that I would like you to observe.

First, the court requires appropriate dress (no hoodies, no mid shirts, etc.). I believe the judge prefers jackets for the men and "business casual" for women. You will see that I am actually dressed up. Look closely, as it does not happen often.

The second rule is that no food or drinks are allowed in the court room.

The third rule is that there is absolutely no talking allowed in court. You may bring notebooks, and I am going to ask you to write up a little ditty about the experience (just your thoughts about it - nothing formal). You may bring these materials with you to court.

Finally, as I am sure you are aware, this case is about my son, and it is of a very personal nature. You will hear all about my body parts and whatnot (as it is about my son's birth). Please understand that I am allowing you to come because I believe that you have a wonderful opportunity to see justice in action, but please recognize that this case is very real to me and my family. You may see me cry or get angry in my chair. These are real emotions, as this case is very real to me. I may not be able to talk to you, but I will try to meet you outside of the court room at 2:10. If not, please know that I appreciate your attendance and value your support. Upon my return, we can talk about the case and all the various components.

CLASS NOTES

Pamela asked some really good questions in an earlier email to me. I promised her I would post the answers here so that all of you can benefit from the response.

You may wonder what we are doing in class and how it applies to College English. As I mentioned earlier in the semester, I teach 105 as a research-based seminar in conjunction with a forms of writing course.

Your first paper, the definition essay, required you to think outside of the box. It required you to define a term that we all use but few of us understand. In writing this essay, you had to suspend what you may have learned in previous English courses. The bottom line was to demonstrate two concepts. First, we may not always know the answer to a question, as there might be problems with the language we use and how we use it. Ambiguity is a difficult concept to teach, but, by requiring you to define "problem," you learned that not all words have concrete meaning. So, as writers, it is important to select words carefully. Secondly, you learned that writing in college has different expectations than at the HS level. This concept can only be taught with a challenging assignment.

In interviewing Dr. Bradley, you learned a primary research skill (interviewing with technology). You also learned summary skills (a college English skill). Additionally, you learned about open source science.

In the Mentos and Coke experiment, you learned that process is important to final product (just like the writing process). When we just went out and did the experiment, there was no solid goal. After a week of looking at different examples, getting hints from online, and doing rough research, you all came up with better ideas about how to do the experiment. The same is true in writing. We don't just sit down and write; we have to gather, analyze, discuss, assess, and then (only then) are we prepared to write.

In interviewing Thom and Vickie, you learned how to conduct a live interview. You learned how to listen to a guest speaker and take careful notes. This is a research skill, as well.

In the narrative essay, you learned how to tell a story with a point (to persuade, inform, or entertain). The topic was meant to get you looking at the people and culture of Sierra Leone (in order to make your story believable). This is another form of research (factual data).

In the Games of Truth assignment, you learned to compare and contrast various existing truths. The presentation you made has been delivered to a teacher at LCTI, and his students will be providing feedback to you.

In working with Mr. Sponsler, you are learning the importance of journal research (we will go over this again when I return). You also learned the importance of MLA.

When I return, we will discuss process writing (the drug development process), compare and contrast (in a more formal way), and persuasive writing. All of these assignments will build up to the research paper. You will use parts of all of your work thus far (with the exception of the "story" within the narrative) to compile your research paper.

At this point, I would like all of you to think about your position on open source science. If you wish to work ahead, begin doing research on the drug development process. How does a drug start in Dr. Bradley's lab and end up in Sierra Leone? Your task will be to write a process paper that maps out the process.

Please let me know if you have questions. I look forward to seeing all of you. I miss you terribly.

Finally, please respond to these questions in the comment tab:

What information do you feel will be most helpful in preparing to write your research paper? What concerns you most right now? What can I do, as your guide, to help you be successul with this research endeavor?



NERD

Wednesday, October 25, 2006

hey everyone :-)

hey p'plez
as i scroll down through the page, i see you guys have been quite busy. i really like the readings, and they do have quite a bit to say about the "truth" and how its twisted n tainted ... so how was class with sir. Sponsler ? fun ha... n e who, try not 2 stress out 2 much.
p.s
Ginny said something about spaghetti nite, dunno if uz are comin, its on nov 6th. 5 ish to about 7 ish

p.p.s
hey REv. Doc. miss u muchos. :-]

y'all no who it is by now.. all smiles :-)
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Monday, October 23, 2006

Guest Lecturer

On Tuesday, you will have the good fortune to meet with Mr. Sponsler. He will be your instructor in the Spring, and I have asked him to come in and tend to you in my absence.

Some points:

Mr. Sponsler will be teaching you VERY important concepts; please give him your FULL attention. I, however, will continue to communicate with you on here, and I will continue to grade your work.

Mr. Sponsler and I have very different teaching styles. Both are unique, and both are valid. He and I are both passionate about the honors English courses, and we share a passion and vision for quality education. Even though we have different styles, we both enjoy our teaching styles and one is not better or worse than another.

I trust Mr. Sponsler and so should you. He and I share a vision for what you need to learn, and so anything he teaches you is consistent with what I would teach you if I were in class.

As soon as this trial is over, I will be resuming my teaching duties. I owe you pizza; I have not forgotten :-)

Sunday, October 22, 2006

Important! PLEASE READ and RESPOND!

Hey Nerdettes:

It appears that I will continue to be out this week (the trial is taking FOREVER). I will arrange to have a substitute come in, if you feel that it is necessary. I don't want you to feel that you are losing out because I am not there physically.

Sooooooooo....I will leave it up to you. We can continue this format, and/or I can bring in a sub. PLEASE VOTE. The vote can be sent to me at bguth@lccc.edu and your opinion is private. However, the whole class must vote unanimously. If even one students wishes to have a live instructor until my return, I will honor that and make it happen.

Monday, October 16, 2006

Tuesday, October 17 Class Notes

Hi Everyone:

Yes....I am STILL in court. I have LOTS to say about the justice system when this is all done.

Announcements:

Your final narratives and "games" papers will be due Tuesday (I expect to be back). I am, of course, willing to help you along the way.

If anyone can meet Thursday or Friday night for pizza, let me know. Just respond to this post with a head count, so I can make reservations. I can tell you about the trial and hand back your graded work that is waiting here for you ;-) (and, of course, I will be paying, so don't pass up this great opportunity). If those two days totally stink, we can do Sunday, as well.

Today's Lesson

We are still talking about the Games of Truth. Either as a class or in groups (with one manager per group, I want you to discuss each of these questions as they apply to some of your summer readings. You will have today and Thursday to work on this project; the final product will be emailed to me on Thursday at 2:00.

Readings:

Margaret Atwood's novel, The Handmaid's Tale

George Orwell's novella, Animal Farm

Ursula LeGuin's short story, "Those Who Walk Away from Omelas"

Kurt Vonnegut's short story, "Harrison Bergeron"

Margaret Atwood's short story, "Happy Endings"

Horace Miner's Anthropological study, "Body Ritual among the Nacirema" (PDF) or John Dowell's version (HTML)

Kate Chopin's short story, "Story of an Hour"

Questions:

1. In each of the stories, identify the various "truths" of the signficant parties.
2. How is the "truth" disseminated? Who are the key players? Which parties have more power?
3. What is the author saying about "truth"? How do you know?
4. Why is it important to understand the "games of truth"?

Assignment:

Each group (or the class), should prepare a creative presentation of these ideas (podcast using Audacity, create a wiki, whatever). Imagine you are teaching this material to a group of 10th graders at a local high school.

First, explain "the game of truth."
Second, provide "common examples" (what you discussed last week), and then,
Third, apply the concept to these readings.

I should be able to understand the presentation of this material without having you present to explain anything to me. So, if you use Audacity (a free download), you can create an Mp3. If not, you should create a powerpoint or handouts that completely explain your ideas. Remember the audience (10th graders). The final project is to be sent to me by Thursday at 2:00 at bguth@lccc.edu

Wednesday, October 11, 2006

Thursday (10/12) In-Class Activity and Homework

Hey Nerdettes:

Podcast (Click on link in class to listen - turn on speakers)

I am still in court (they haven't even decided on a jury yet...three days of jury selection...ugh).

Announcements:
Before the end of class, please email me your rough drafts for the narrative essays. I will read them and return them to you this weekend for revisions. Please let me know if you would like "typed comments" or "voice comments."

In Class:

Michel Foucault, a French Philosopher, spoke of the "games of truth." The phrase "games of truth" means that truth, itself, isn't always the goal, but that how the "game" is played has more to do with who is believed. For example, textbook prices are high, and the bookstore tells you that they can't lower them because they will lose profit and so the publishers should charge less. The publishers say they can't lower prices and that the bookstore is charging too much for them with their 33% mark ups. Sooo....in the end...both sides offer a version of the truth, but which is side is actually true?

In your groups, think of one "game of truth" that affects students (not the bookstore). Post it as a reply to this post (before 2:15 pm). Also, if you have some good personal examples that you might like to share with the world, you can do that, as well. Spend only about a half hour on this task.

When you are finished, read the following article submitted by one of your peers http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/15187244/site/newsweek/

As a class, discuss the "game of truth" as you see it applied to Sierra Leone. Who are the major players? Who are the minor players? What are the various existing "truths"? Which "truths" do you accept or deny? Post your class notes here (only one person needs to submit notes for the class). Take your time to explore this topic, as you will be seeing it again very soon on one of them tricky little mid term exams (HINT HINT).

HOMEWORK

For homework, do some research on the issues you discussed and write a one page paper that answers this question: Does the "game of truth," as you understand it, NEED to exist in Sierra Leone? Why or why not?

Tuesday, October 10, 2006

WOW! I am jealous!

The "teasers" are great...but there are some that are better than others.

Here are some tips:

1. The story must be BELIEVABLE! A martian can't fly down from the moon and scoop you into his cyber canoe.

2. The story should have realistic detail.

3. The story should reflect a true understanding of cultural practices in Sierra Leone.

Your draft is due in class on Thursday, and you will receive instructions for what I would like you to do with the drafts.

Monday, October 09, 2006

Tuesday, October 10 Class Directions

Hello Students!

I am in court today, so I will not be in class. Here are your directions:

1. Meet in your groups.

2. Go over the outlines of your narrative essays. Be sure to look at:
A. Plot
B. Credibility
C. Purpose
D. Detail
E. Organization
F. Grammar and mechanics (flow)

3. At the end of class, respond to THIS post with a comment from your group giving me "teasers" about your stories. Make me jealous that I can't be there to read them myself :-) The more creative the "teaser," the more points your group will get. Think in terms of a commercial.

4. The comment MUST be posted BEFORE 2:15 PM TODAY! Late submissions will NOT be accepted or counted. Every post receives a time stamp, so I will know what time you submitted the assignment (hint hint).

Good Luck!!!!! Email me with questions, but know that I won't be able to respond until after court.

Thursday, October 05, 2006

Narrative Essay Lecture Notes

Here are the Lecture Notes from today :-)

Your narrative "plan" is due Tuesday in class.

Narrative Essay Lecture Notes

Here are the Lecture Notes from today :-)

Your narrative "plan" is due Tuesday in class.

Saturday, September 30, 2006

Interview Recording

Here is a link to the portion of the interview we recorded in class. We are very thankful that Thom and Vickie came to class to speak about the work they do in Sierra Leone.

Remember, this whole project works together in this way:

Dr. Bradley's lab is on one end; Thom and Vickie are on the other end. We operate in the middle. In the end, will OSS help the children in Kabala, Sierra Leone? If not, why not? If so, how?

Friday, September 29, 2006

Rev. Thom and Vickie Hicks


In class on Thursday, we hosted Rev. Thom and Vickie Hicks of Louisville, KY. Their group, the Nazareth House Apostolate, is a non-denomimational humanitarian aid group that provides support to the people "in the cracks" of Sierra Leone. I will be posting up a portion of their talk, but, for security reasons, we did not record the entire talk.

On one end, we work with Dr. Bradley and the work his students do in the lab. On the other end, we work with this humanitarian group. Our job will be to determine whether or not the science Dr. Bradley's lab generates will ever make it to "the cracks."







Tuesday, September 26, 2006

Project Notes

Mentos and Diet Coke Revisited!!!

Here are the lecture notes about the purpose of our project.

mp3

Friday, September 22, 2006

The Writing Process Podcast, Screencast, and Vodcast

Since Audacity cut me off at 10 minutes, I created a screencast of the lecture notes for the writing process.

Podcast (mp3)

Audio (wav)

The Screencast is located here (MOV file)

The Video Podcast is located here (m4v file)

Lecture Notes

So...for some reason, I only got the first 10 minutes of lecture notes. Grrrr.

Thursday, September 21, 2006

Team Wiki Check

I went through the Team Wikis. Overall, I think many of you gathered good information, but you weren't sure how to use it. PLEASE go back and look at my comments and imbed links as appropriate. I will be posting up the lecture notes in a few minutes under a different post.

NERD

Tuesday, September 19, 2006

A Call to Action

Hey all,


As I mentioned in your College Experience class this morning, I am co-directing a production of Sophocles' Antigone.


We would appreciate any possible contribution in three areas:


1) Actors! We need actors! Auditions are being held in the Student Union on Tuesday Sept 26th at 2:30 pm and Wednesday Sept 27th at 7 pm. If having a starring role isn't your thing (as most of the few characters in Antigone are fairly major), we need somewhere around a dozen people for the chorus, which provides narration throughout the play.


2) Stage crew: if you would like to be stage manager or part of the stage crew, we can certainly use you. This also includes costume designers and other such roles as well,


3) Researchers! We are trying to do this play as faithfully as possible in the Greek dramatic tradition, with the exceptions that a) we will need female actresses and more than three total actors and b) the actors won't be carrying their masks, as I fear this would be cumbersome. So, following the collaborative nature of this production, we thought it would be nice if we had a little group of people to research Greek drama – costumes, staging, scenery, the festivals, music, the masks, etc. If you have any class that relates in any way to Greek culture, you could definitely make an Honors project out of it. I think your tasks would go something along the lines of Jeff (my co-director) or I being unsure of what kinds of props they used, for example, and then going to one of you and asking you to find some information. This doesn't necessarily have to be formal or involve writing on your part (unless you make it into an Honors project): going online and printing out a relevant article would be perfectly satisfactory.


So, any help would be very much appreciated! And I believe NERD is offering extra credit for those who do participate. ;) Hope to see at least a few of you at the auditions next week.

Saturday, September 16, 2006

Wiki Overhaul

As requested, I redesigned the class wiki. Check it out. If you have suggestions, please let me know!!!

Wednesday, September 13, 2006

Mentos and Diet Coke

So, I understand there is a new internet craze: MENTOS and DIET COKE!!! These scientists are combining 4 mentos to a 2 liter bottle of diet coke.


Why does it happen???

Try to find the answer....and post it here.

Tuesday, September 12, 2006

College versus High School

Dear Nerdettes:

I know some of you left class today angry, frustrated, and bewildered about research in college. I appreciate your frustration, and I want to offer these remarks.

There is a big difference between what some HS teachers think you need to learn for college and what we, as professors, need you to know. HS teachers and professors do not often engage in discussion along these lines, and, as a result, many of your peers (at almost every college) are feeling exactly the way you do right now.

Research, of any kind, requires support from reputable sources. All of your work is based on an opinion you make about a topic, but you have to support your ideas with the ideas of others.

Here is an example:
My opinion is that Open Source Science, as defined by Dr. Bradley, will result in important and immediate changes in drug development; these changes will benefit the neediest in the global community by producing urgent medicines for poor countries.

To make this is a thesis statement (still my opinion), I will remove the "my opinion is that."

To support this statement, I will have to find out Dr. Bradley's position and the positions of those who oppose him. I will use that documentation to prove my thesis. We call this "evidence." The quality of your evidence adds validity to your position.

I know it is hard to see the "end of the rainbow." But, truly, truly, you will appreciate this approach in the end.

Monday, September 11, 2006

Hey

Hey new honor's kids, good luck and all. If anybody wants to talk to me my sn is NYYanks41996.



Potter

Sunday, September 10, 2006

Google Grid

Hey Nerdillios:

I found this site about the Google Grid: http://prouarch.free.fr/googlegrid/

Although it isn't in English, you can get the concept. I type in science and got a grid full of sciencey looking pics.

In light of the movie we watched, I can only say HMMMMMMMMMMM...Beta testing????

Thursday, September 07, 2006

Interview of Dr. Jean-Claude Bradley

Students in English 105 interviewed Dr. Jean-Claude Bradley at Drexel using Skype. The students are working on a definition of open source science.

Tuesday, September 05, 2006

Wiki Revisions

I revised the class wiki; hopefully, it will be easier for y'all to use. Please give me feedback. The wiki is structured to be a tool for YOU, so please don't hesitate to make suggestions.

NERD

Friday, September 01, 2006

Lecture Notes - August 30

These are posted in the Nerd Cave, too. Please feel free to comment here or there.

Some Lecture Notes:

English is all about the dissemination of good information in usable words that "anyone" can access (clearly, this means persons with the ability to read and write English). These are the concepts you will always need to address:

1. What was your methodology? What process did you take to arrive at the information you gathered? How did you get it?

2. What criteria did you use to analyze the information you gathered? Did you look at source and bias? Did you look to make sure data is current and relevant? Did you look to see if others built off that research?

3. How did you document your work? In English, we use MLA, but other fields (science, for example) use other documentation styles. In your dissemination of material, did you note the audience and how they expect to see citation materials?

4. In disseminating information, did you clarify vague terminology by offering definitions when appropriate? Are you relying on current scholars and scholarship to support your claims?

Wednesday, August 30, 2006

Hints for Homework

That Gold Star winning Sarge created an excellent discussion board for our class. GO TO IT...I left y'all some helpful hints about the homework :-) HINT HINT HINT BIG HINT HUGE HINT

Tuesday, August 29, 2006

Pamela

Hi I think I figured this all out!!!

Yeah!

Thanks to all who helped!

Pamela

Hijacked user

Hey, it's sarge under Ri's name.

In order to keep some form of order to our conversations and discussion outside of class (soc class, english class, is red lichorish reall better, ect) I have taken the liberty of making a forum for us honor students.

The Url is http://nerdcave.proboards106.com

C ya there!!!

Wednesday, August 23, 2006

Good Luck Students!

Ninja!

Tuesday, August 22, 2006

Welcome!

We had a really great time at the Honors Picnic tonight! We welcomed our new class of Honors Scholars, and some of our vets (Winnie, Nada, and Ery) were on hand to spread rumors :-)

Some things to consider....

First, I am participating in the 2,996 project on September 11th to honor victims of 911.

Please consider joining me in this project. Basically, you sign up and they give you the name of a victim. On 9-11-2006, you commit to writing on your blog (here or your own) about the person you are honoring. It would be cool if both the vets and the newbies blogged on that day.

Second, I am collecting flip flops for children (nd adults) in Sierra Leone. They are super cheap (25 cents at the dollar store).

Third, we will be thinking of ways to raise money to purchase a generator for the mission in Sierra Leone. Some of you like to wash cars, right? can we think of a group bonding project that would also help us raise money for these folks? Imagine having electricity for only two hours a day....ugh. Read more here.

Saturday, August 19, 2006

Expecations of Honors English 105

This is a short movie outlining my expectations of students in College English 105 Honors at Lehigh Carbon Community College.

Tuesday, July 04, 2006

6 flags trip

Hey I was planning a 6 flags trip and the date is July 18th. Um call me or im me or email me if u can go, invited friends, im going to try to see if we can get a group rate. I have a few of my wacky friends going, Good news for parkland grads though my friend Dan Marino is not able to come. Well good news for most ppl, but anyways, yeah my cell is 610-304-8642, my sn is NYYanks41996, my email is NYYanks1996@gmail.com, or for anyone who lives at the mall u can talk to me there. Anyways later, adios, and my computer still sucks so yeah im still working on getting pix up.

Wednesday, June 28, 2006

Philly Trip

So, which weekend works best for everyone? How about either the 14th, 15th, or 16th?

Tuesday, June 13, 2006

Attention ERY!!!

Hey Ery:

Sue Fread would like to use the Ten Commandments you wrote in Spring. She wants to send it to the new honors students, but she needs your permission first. Can you email her a sfread@lccc.edu and grant her gold stars and permission?

Thanks,

NERD

Hey Nerds

Hey all!

I hope you are having a festive summer. I am working, as usual...torturing more students with the you/your principle.

I am putting together the Honors 105 for fall. Since I am all about open sourcing (like MIT), I have everything listed here: http://collegeenglish.wikispaces.com/lccceng105

Check it out and send me comments :-)

Beth, Queen of the NERDS

Thursday, June 08, 2006

SUMMER!!! XD

HELLO THERE EVERYBODY!

Well...I've run into a few of you over the summer so far...so what is everyone up to?!

I MISS YOU GUYS LIKE CRAZY! Well...actually I miss you like shrimp o.o;;; i haven't had good shrimp in like...3 weeks man. It's buggin' me...

My summer:
work at waldens (COME AND VISIT ME! Tis lonely ;_;)
work new job which is an all nighter 10pm - 630 am so i can fix my car for insp. at the end of the month
reading
NOT sleeping
culture fests
world bank with Nada ^_^

What about the rest of you?

Friday, May 26, 2006

Italy

Well Italy was fun, I'll get the pix up on a site as soon as I kill my computer and get a new one. The weather was great. The sites were great. THE FOOD WAS AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!! So yeah I don't know what else to say but ill get the pix up in a few days.


Potter

Yankees
26-19
Jeter is a hit shy of 2000 career hits

"Wanna take a dump in Mother Maggies' shoes....Lets take a dump in Mother Maggies' shoes" Brian from Family Guy

Wednesday, May 24, 2006

Italy

Yeah, so we all had a great time in Italy, as predicted. Sunny and about 80 degrees every single day. We stayed in a convent, which was in an excellent location: a minute walk from the Piazza Navona. Eric got drunk every night. I got drunk on two sips of wine at the Trevi Fountain. We took a picture of a giant pineapple. Sarah flirted with charming waiters (and got kissed on the neck). Chris covered himself in chocolate gelato. I walked accross cobblestone in heels (and nearly died). We got lost - frequently. I took 643 pictures and videos; I uploaded a handful of them:


http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v651/zenblends/Italy%2006/


Hopefully Eric, Sarah, and Chris will follow suit!


We got a kick out of this:

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This is for you, Ery:

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I'll burn a CD with all the pictures and we can all look at them sometime at our next NERD reunion. Ciao!

hello there everyone

hey guys whats good, hope u'z had muchos fun in italy, and for those of us who stayed hope u are all enjoing ur vaccation, n e who i miss uz soooooooooooooo much n i hope u all take care n be well, n i guess i'll probably see youz sometime in the summer. also thanks a alot to Rev Dr. for this blog spot, hope we'll keep this going. enjoy ur summers and be blessed
much love
sexy pooh bear. :=)

Monday, May 08, 2006

Carpooling

Nada, where are C.J. and you guys meeting on Thurs. and at what time?

Friday, May 05, 2006

PHILLY TRIP

I was wondering if everyone still wanted to go down to Philly this Monday. If so, what time do we want to meet? 9 AM or so?

Monday, May 01, 2006

Literary Cannon >>

All righty...the literary cannon...such a prestigious title

I find it difficult to come to a real conclusion. The dictionary says that poetry is:

A verbal composition designed to convey experiences, ideas, or emotions in a vivid and imaginative way, characterized by the use of language chosen for its sound and suggestive power and by the use of literary techniques such as meter, metaphor, and rhyme.

I don't know if I even agree with this definition - like the cat poem in our book, that's hardly meant to be read, rather it's meant to be seen. there are some poems that do not use meter, metaphor and do not rhyme at all yet are still considered poetry. Really...what is poetry? We can pick it out when we see it or hear it, but can we define it?

English is becoming more and more structured over time - how many of us only wrote 5-paragraph essays all through highschool and had grammar rather than content drilled into our heads? It seems to me like Poetry has blissfully disreguarded its defnition. I think it should stay that way. I think our poetry book (after re-reading some of the selections, I am rescinding my original opinions) is full of different examples of the expansive territory that poetry covers. People did not just grab poems and through them into the cannon. There was a lot of thought that went into it. I think that this literary cannon gives the reader a broad taste of poetry and should be left as is. I don't want to define poetry or divide it into "good" or "bad". It's all just different to me ^^;;

Thursday, April 27, 2006

My Dearest NERDS

Thank you, so very much, for the awesome last supper (as Nada calls it) or Beowulfian feast (as I am fond of calling it). You all went above and beyond in bringing in exotic food (ye gads...those potato peanut butter things sent me into diabetic shock...next time, warn me, so I can bring insulin :-)

In my spare time this weekend (LOL!!!), I will be grading the edits that have filtered through to me. Please check WebCT feverishly for grade updates. They will be listed in the grades tab. The last paper should be posted there as well as the final exam.

You are a tremendous lot of students, and I will miss this class miserably. I hope that we can reune after the Italy goers return, so we can hear of their adventures.

I wish all of you incredible success. I have never met a group so diverse in all my life, and you reminded me, even if only temporarily, of the joy and adventure of my own undergraduate and graduate days. I can only say that the next group has great shoes to fill :-)

All the best; keep your wits about ya,

Beth, Defunct Queen of the NERDS

Wednesday, April 26, 2006

The Literary Cannon stuff..

As for the literary cannon stuff, I mean, as I have flipped through most of the poems, even ones that I thought I wouldn't like just by the funky titles, I did enjoy reading. I believe that the poems that are in the cannon are there for a reason. I'm sure that the people who allowed for them to be in the cannon were smart enough to include stuff that they though was important. And they even included a parable de bible, yey. Any who, I do also believe that maybe including a few poems from some African poets, or such, would also bring an interesting perfective to the kind of poems we are presented with. It is interesting to read poems from various contrast of parts of the world and see what themes are resonate in many of them. N e who, this is my little diddy on the Cannon. thats a really funky name, and it is heavy, almost like a cannon ( depending on which type u have).

Tuesday, April 25, 2006

Literary Canon

I think that in a poem the tone, meter, rhythm, and order and location of the words should matter. Therefore, it is very hard to write a one line poem that qualifies as a poem. A poem should convey some meaning or emotion. There are some nonsense poems which rely entirely on their meter, rhythm, etc. However, if the poem lacks meaning and does not make up for it in some other way I do not think it should be included in the literary canon. Something that could be written in a different form without losing anything, also, does not qualify as poetry. Concrete poetry is borderline.

"Poems" such as "The Cathedral Is," the whole length of which runs "Slated for demolition" (828), sounds more like a public announcement than a poem. Even with the interplay between the title and the one line it does not qualify as poetry. It does not have a beautiful or unusual sound which conveys some meaning. Very little meaning can be drawn from the words of "The Cathedral Is" without a great stretch. It does not meet the criteria for poetry. "Coward" also is not a poem (823). It could just as easily be written as a one line joke, with the coward as the speaker.

"The Colonel" should not be considered poetry (944). At best it can be considered prose. It does not follow the form of any type of poetry, but is instead written in paragraph form. It does not have a distinctive meter or rhythm. It does not rhyme. There is nothing in its sound to distinguish it from ordinary speech. Therefore, it is not poetry.

Concrete poetry is borderline. Poems such as "Swan and Shadow" should certainly qualify (946). It has a relevant meter, tone, etc. It is very expressive, and the words are carefully chosen. The form of the swan adds to the poem, but is not the entire purpose of it. "Concrete Cat" (948), however, is not poetry. It is creative, and it gives a very good impression of a cat, but it is not poetry. It has no meter, tone, or rhythm. The words themselves have no meaning other than to identify the part of the cat they represent. Concrete poetry may qualify as a form of art, but I do not think it should be included in the literary canon as poetry.

As for the rest, any poem should be included that either demonstrates something particularly well, is a very good example of its type, or is particularly beautiful or meaningful. It should also meet as many of these criteria as it can. A poem that is a very good demonstration of something and is beautiful and meaningful would be a better choice than one that is just a good demonstration. As a result, poems such as "You Fit Into Me" should not be included in the literary canon (828), because they are far from being beautiful and are hardly meaningful. A good example of this is how they could have used Poe’s work. His poem, "Annabel Lee" (1088), is used to demonstrate great poetry, but "A Dream Within A Dream" is hidden among the "poems for further reading" (1225). "A Dream Within A Dream" is an excellent example of metaphor, and is much more beautiful and meaningful than such works as "You Fit Into Me."

literary cannon stuff

i think its important to be able to see a whole bunch of literary works that have different views, styles, and interpretataions. also, the book includes a "well rounded" ;) selection of works, so it can accomdate virtually every literary reading requirement. i think the literary cannon idea is very important because it allows for diversity of differnt types of works, but maybe students should have an input too.......

Monday, April 24, 2006

Schnicks

A couple reminders regarding the upcoming production:


The Esteemed Reverend Doctor would like everybody who is involved in the play to write a short bio (like, a few
sentences) for the program book. This would include your major here, where you live,
theater experience...that sort of thing. Winnie, you're exempt. ;)


Also, rehearsals have started this week – 6 pm in the gym. It would be nice if ya'll could
stop by tomorrow, as we're hoping to get some of the multimedia stuff going then. It is
important, though, to come to the Wednesday (and Thursday) rehearsal, as we are
getting the lights and sound, and the tech people need to learn how and when to use them.

Friday, April 21, 2006

Tone

The mood of the poem relies on the tone. Both the author of the poem and the singer who sings this realized this. The author realized that he must pick the proper words, the proper story and the proper format for this poem. The singer realized that she needs to pick appropriate music for the background and she must sing it appropriately. To create the tone of the poem the author and the singer had to pay attention to the little things, the story, the word choice and the format of the poem.

The tone of the poem relies on the story behind this poem. The story is a sad, mournful story of a lady being locked away in a tower. She is cursed to stay in there, though she does not know the curse. She is forced to look at the prosperous town of Camelot through a mirror. When she does leave the tower at the end she dies. By creating the story line the author also created the tone of the story. The author's goal was to create a mournful and sad poem about a death of a woman. Changing any part of the story could have changed the tone. By beginning the poem with a lady being cursed away in a tower near Camelot starts off the sad and mournful tone. Leading into how she spends her day in the tower and how she can not leave adds to the overall tone. Then ending with her death because she left for a man still adds to the tone. By changing the ending to she lived with some defect, or isolating her in a house would change the tone. Also by creating the serious story line the tone is reinforced since there are no possibilities for any twists. By creating the story the author then can pick the words he will use.

Lord Alfred Tennyson did a great job with his word choice for the poem. He words are descriptive yet have a sense to death and sadness. Picking words such as "reapers", "grey" "webs" helped create the mournful tone through the description of the thriving town of Camelot. Also the word choice help foreshadows the death of the Lady of Shalott. It is important to pick the words carefully to create the tone of the play. By using dark but descriptive words Lord Alfred Tennyson achieve the mournful tone. He could have easily picked bright, cheery, descriptive words and change the whole tone to the poem. For example by changing the word "grey" to silver and the word "bed" to area in the second stanza the whole stanza becomes a little more cheerful. The author had to choose the words that would create the tone he wanted. The singer of the poem had to edit the poem to fit a song format. Some of the poem has bright spots; the singer had to edit those out to make have the song fit the tone. The words in those sections would change the overall sense of the song. The author and the singer made decisions to keep the tone the same.

The format of the poem is also important to create the tone that the author wanted. The poem had to tell a story and keep the tone. The singer emphasizes the importance of the format by creating the song to the poem. If the poem was shorter it would have seemed brighter and cheerful. The poem had to be long and drawn out to achieve the mournful the author wanted. The singer also realized this and placed long rests between stanzas. The author also had to create realized that the poem had to have a certain beat or rhythm. A faster rhythm would have brightened up the poem. The format has to be kept as it is to keep the proper tone to the poem.

Thursday, April 20, 2006

Brain Damage

I totally forgot what I told you to put up here...don't get old...lol. I am sure it has something to do with poetry. Oh wait...now it has come to me...

Look over the TOC in your big ole book, and discuss the contents in terms of the literary canon. Should those things be there? Should anything be removed? Why or why not?

A reminder: Your class party is on Wednesday - bring ethnic food; we will be festing under the tree and then moving in to watch that movie....hmmmm...what is it called again???

Wednesday, April 19, 2006

The Tone of “The Lady of Shalott”

Without the solemn tune and beautiful voice of Loreena Mckennitt, the tone of Alfred Lord Tennyson's poem, “The Lady of Shalott,” has a dynamic tone that shifts throughout.

The poem begins with the picturesque imagery of “barley and rye, that clothe the world and meet the sky” and lilies surrounding a peaceful island. The initial tone can appear tranquil and comforting with the imagery of the first stanza, but it changes quickly.

In the second stanza the tone shifts from the warm feeling of barley and rye and sweet flowers to a sense of eternal coldness. The “whitening willows, quivering aspens, and shivering breezes” invoke a cold, icy tone, and things have always been this way on the island of Shalott because the “wave runs forever.” The tower that “imbowers” The Lady of Shalott is grey, unlike the colorful flowers and crops surrounding it. The tone informs the reader that The Lady of Shalott had been sheltered from the beautiful world around her by something cold and grey. This is where the mournful emotional coloring begins to form.

A remorseful tone arises from the third stanza when the reader learns the true seclusion The Lady of Shalott faces. She has never been scene by anyone, and rumors circulate that she is only a fairy. Tennyson uses words like “weary” and “airy” in the fourth stanza to further create the remorseful tone and blend it with the idea that The Lady of Shalott is so insignificant to those in Camelot. In the seventh stanza, the remorseful tone heightens with Tennyson’s words, “she hath no loyal Knight and true.”

A tone of desire and yearning begins in the eight stanza when the images of “magic sights” and young lovers under the light of the moon can only be perceived as shadows in The Lady of Shalott’s mirror. when She enlightens that she is “half sick of shadows,” and the yearning tone caries into the following four stanzas as Sir Lancelot is depicted.

As The Lady of Shalott breaches the terms of her curse and begins her decent to Camelot, a suspenseful tone arises. The rhythmic pace of the stanzas increases and imagery of “the stormy east-wind straining” and “the pale yellow woods waning” help to create the suspenseful tone.

The cold, icy tone is reformed as The Lady of Shalott begins her final song “lying, robed in snowy white.” The icy tone parallels her blood as it is “frozen slowly.”

After the death of The Lady of Shalott the tone becomes dark and gloomy. Her eyes become “darkened wholly,” and her body is “dead-pale” and silent.

Finally, the tone shifts to remorse again as “the sound of royal cheer” dies and the townspeople come to morn her death.

The poem’s tone is dynamic throughout when simply reading the stanzas, but with the solemn tune and beautiful voice of Loreena Mckennitt, the poem has a static, smooth, and tranquil tone with a hint of remorse and lamentation. There is also a hint of danger arising in the tone of Mckennitt’s voice.

Tone in "The Lady of Shallot

Brenda R. Vogelsinger
Mrs. Beth Ritter-Guth
English 206-06
19 April 2006
Tone in “The Lady of Shallot”
In his poem, “The Lady of Shallot,” Alfred Lord Tennyson creates a sad, mystical, eerie tone. He artistically employs descriptions of the natural surroundings to highlight character qualities as well as to foreshadow the ending of his piece. The movements of plants—the very sounds of nature—evoke images of something surreal—tangible but simultaneously intagible. This effect succeeds in speaking directly to the reader while capturing a fairytale feeling.
Tennyson includes somber images of nature to begin his poem, which sets the overall tone for the entire piece. “Willows whiten, aspens quiver” while “little breezes dusk and shiver.” Tennyson paints a chilling, airy scene. The reader almost shivers. These natural surroundings lead his audience to grey towers, which depict a dreary color—sadness—a bleak future. He speaks of whispers about fairies and curses. They seem as voices in one’s mind, but they have such real impacts in the poem itself. While the reader quivers with the aspens, whitens with the willows, and dusks and shivers with the breeze, he also hears whispers of something sinister. Additionally, the Lady of Shallot peers into a mirror and sees “shadows of the world appear.” In these shadows she can see the town of Shallot. She sees girls going to market and young lovers speaking softly to one another. These people seem very real and perform very real, mundane acts; however, they merely represent the reality. They are mere shadows. They are shadows that become reality in the town that sets below the natural surroundings of whitening, quivering, dusking, and shivering.
The description of the natural world changes when Lancelot enters the poem. Tennyson employs bold, strapping language to describe the knight. Even the weather changes to “blue” and unclouded.” His helmet and helmet feather burn like a flame. The sky turns purple—a color of majesty—and the clustered stars shine brightly while a meteor burns in the sky. The natural world surrounding Lancelot appears majestic, solid, and certain while the world surrounding the Lady of Shallot is airy, something one can hardly touch—mere shadows and whispers.
Tennyson prophecies a melancholy end to the Lady of Shallot as he paints the natural scene around her before her eventual end. “In the stormy east-wind strainging” while “the pale yellow woods were waning” and “the broad stream in his banks complaining” and “heavily the low sky raining,” the Lady of Shallot prepares for her journey down river. The “stormy east-wind” juxtaposed with the “waning woods,” the “complaining banks” and the “low raining sky,” establishes a foreboding tone. She lies “robed in snowy white” while the leaves fall upon her lightly. The Lady of Shallot is like a dried leaf—temporary, fleeting, sad, mystical. The river leads her boat among “willowly hills and fields.” Willows are whispy and light much like the Lady that travels through them. She arrives in Camelot dead and pale; she resembles a ghost, which creates an eerie image that harmonizes with the whitening willows depicted at the outset. Long before the Lady of Shallot arrives dead in Camelot, though, Tennyson seals her eerie, sad, mystical end through his descriptions of the natural world around her. His descriptions create contrast while establishing a fairytale feeling to his poem. At the same time, however, “The Lady of Shallot” promotes critical thinking on complex levels.

Poor, Poor, Lady of Shalott.

Tone in the Lady of Shalott
In the lady of Shallot, the poem evokes a feeling of sadness in the reader through its melancholic tone, implied through its specific word usage. It is through the words used in the poem, that such a melancholic tone is sensed. In the first stanza, we are informed that she lives on an island, all alone. Sure, in today’s standards owning one’s one island may be a luxury but, in the poem it greatly implies that she basically lives her lonesome life, day by day, with very little, or no human interaction. In the second stanza, the color grey could also be perceived as a symbol of sadness, or a gloomy aura. Grey colors incorporated in literary works usually represent sad and gloomy emotions, which also help create the tone in the tragedy of the “lady of Shallot”. Also, in the last line of the second stanza, it is written that “silence” surrounds her. Silence could imply an aura of sadness because, usually when one thinks of happiness and joy, loud, jovial sounds are usually associated with it. On the contrary, in the lady of Shalott’s tower, grim silence “embowers” her chamber. As the poem progresses, it is implied that, no one even knows who she is, the people of Camelot think she is just some fairy who live up in the tower and sings beautiful songs.
As she weaves her web, she sees the village girls walking by with their “red cloaks,” it seems as if all of them –the women in the outside world, have their loyal knights, except her. This saddens her, as she wishes that she too could also have that joyous life. She wants to be free, wear beautiful garments, experience love, and have a loyal knight of her own. She does not want to be alone forever, surely, no one does. In effect as her experience is portrayed, a feeling of sadness and almost sympathetic tone towards the lady of Shallot is induced in the reader. In the seventeenth stanza, the poem states that the people of Camelot heard a mournful carol, which came from the lady of Shalott; as she died, while singing her sad, sad song. Furthermore, it is also through the specific colors, and word choice used in the poem, that a melancholic tone and emotion is summoned in the reader. Words such as: “dead-pale, silent, mournful, pale-yellow, dim, grey, and shadows,” all imply a tone of sadness; which truly resonates throughout the poem. In addition, this melancholic tone evoked through the words in the poem, is finally topped off with a tragic ending –the lady of Shalott dies, killed by love, or, maybe just her wanting to experience and feel love.
Truly, who would willingly chose to live a life cursed, without any human interaction? Without love? Without freedom? Or even an enjoyment of one’s existence? No one, I suppose. Such a life did the lady of shallot live; alone in a tower, confined, lonely, with no hope of ever finding a loyal knight to call her own. Unable to look down upon Camelot, and behold the beauty it encapsulates. For it is through the tone, suggested by the particular word usage in the poem is the sad, and gloomy tone evoked in the reader.

Purple Socks {I feel the urge to be different ¬_¬}

Analyzing the tone of a poem means discovering the active interplay between the speaker(s), the subject and the audience. That's why it's necessary to analyze all of these parts before deciding the tone of the "Lady of Shallot".

The poem was written by Alfred Tennyson (as you all know ^^ I hope) in 1832. The poem is an obvious allegory of the complex Victorian view of women during this time period. The home became a holy place, set apart and meant to be sacred. It was meant to be kept safe from the turbulent atmosphere of the time. Here, spiritual values and purity could be preserved no matter what occurred in the outside world. In the poem, Tennyson immediately sets up these two worlds by separating the Shallot from Camelot. The Lady represents the view of how a woman should act in this sacred home. Women were the "ladies" of the home and were responsible for the well being of the family, both spiritual and physical. Their role here assumed "an importance previously inconceivable" (Victorian <-- great wording here, had to cite it!). She became a beacon of salvation to her husband and to her family. Her purity as a woman made her that much more attractive. The Lady of Shallot embodies the ideal Victorian woman - unattainable, mysterious, pure and completely dedicated to her interior world. Up until the arrival of the knights and the sights of young lovers, the poem didn't seem sad after I had thought about the time period. For those of the day reading this, they probably considered this situation ideal. This woman could not be more unattainable! She was perfect by their definitions. Perhaps I felt sad for her at first because I'm looking at it with my modern eyes. "Held in a tower your whole life? Man that's gotta suck." But after thinking about it, there was nothing that said she was being forced there. She was happy and content. She wanted to be there. And she didn't need a knight in order to be happy. The mirror provided her with all she desired from the exterior world - pictures to weave.


When Sir Lancelot rode by, her entire world changed. It was at this time that the mirror broke and she found herself under the curse. She was not cursed in the beginning, forced into the "home". Rather, the curse was love, was desires of a world unlike her own that lead to her demise. Love killed her. When she left her interior world for the harsh exterior, it killed her. The way she died is described as her blood freezing. The home is usually described as a warm and loving place, so once leaving it, the harshness of the exterior world froze her blood and she died. A bit of a stretch yes, but I see this as symbolism for a woman wanting to leave her responsibilities in the home during the time period.

So, what moral or conclusion is there in this poem? What was Tennyson trying to get across to his audience? Was it worth her life to risk everything for love, for a man who gave her only 16 words of pity after her death? Or should she have stayed in the tower, content with herself and await a knight of her own rather than chasing another one? The poem, with it's ironic and almost pitying diction seems to lead me to the latter conclusion. She felt cursed, I don't think she felt one bit of happiness after leaving the tower. She received nothing from the experience except her death. Even Lancelot pitied her; "She should have just stayed in the tower" - I found myself concluding in the pity I had for her.

I'd like to believe that Tennyson thought the condition women lived under - this need to be confined to the home - was unfair. Women should be liberated and free. However, I can't force that onto the poem. I honestly think that the tone of the poem is pitiful because he was fronting a certain social structure, which today we would consider unfair. He wanted to show what happens to women when they leave their world, the world they were meant to care for, when they desire things of the exterior. It leads only to heartache and ruin. We pity her. That's what Tennyson wanted.

I think the song version my Loreena McKennitt portrays more of this didactic pity than the poem does on its own. I expected the song (after reading the poem) to be haunting and sad, like many of her other works (If I can find my old cassette, I will bring it in!). But it wasn't. It was more like a story, like reading a fairy tale in song. The kind you expect to hear "And the moral is" at the end, but Tennyson leaves that part out. It wasn't written for an audience for 2006, rather it was written for those of the time, to explain why women and men were separated.


I'm not sure yet if I agree with him, but I am sure that for the Victorian age, his metaphor of an ideal woman being destroyed by the exterior world was pretty convincing.

Yes - there is class today

This is an example of why listening to rumors is a bad thing. Yes, it is true that I am working from home. But, no, it is not true that class is cancelled.

I will meet y'all by the tree at 2:20.

Tuesday, April 18, 2006

Ery's Plea for Help

Hey Ery:

No problem with the shameless solicitation of help, lol. It would be REALLY cool, though, if your friends did this for you for free, and y'all donated the money to a worthy cause (maybe Habitat for Humanity?). I am all about charity, and this seems like an opportunity for all of you to help Ery and the community :-) I will even come out and swing sledge hammers with you; there is nothing quite like swing a sledge hammer, lol.

In Pursuit of Aesthetic Poetical Tone

Through a masterful manipulation of words, Alfred Lord Tennyson effectively creates a reflective and sometimes mournful tone that mirrors the narrated events in The Lady of Shalott.

The poem itself has a surreal, dreamlike quality. The use of rhymes at the end of the lines gives a smooth, flowing feel and helps it to move along at a nice pace. Each stanza is much like a painting; every word acts as a paint daub in order to help create a striking visual image.
The Lady of Shalott’s island has a mystical, slightly chilling, and eerily peaceful feel: “aspens quiver” and “little breezes dusk and shiver”; it is a “silent isle,” and a world of shadows. She is portrayed as a graceful, pure, and almost mournful woman who spends her days in aesthetic pursuits; “’tis the fairy/ The Lady of Shalott.” Apparently, nobody has seen her; they only hear “a song that echoes cheerly”; this only adds to her mystical, fairy-like quality.

Her world is greatly contrasted with the colorful world beyond: Camelot, which she can only view in a mirror. There, “damsels glad,” pages ‘in crimson clad,” and lovers walk by. Sir Lancelot in particular stands out among the “magic sights,” as all sorts of bright and sun-like imagery is associated with his appearance: he “sparkled on the yellow field,” his “gemmy bridle glitter’d free” like stars in the “golden Galaxy” and “rang merrily,” his “saddle-leather” shone like thick jewels, and his “helmet and helmet-feather/ Burn’d like one burning flame together.” The “sun came dazzling thro’ the leaves/ And flamed upon the brazen greaves,” the weather was “blue” and “unclouded,” and as he rode “below the starry clusters bright,” a “bearded meteor, burning bright” passed over the island of Shalott. The tone associated with Lancelot expresses the bright, colorful reality of the outside world, while the Lady dwells in the reflected shadows of this world.

As the Lady falls in love with Lancelot, conflict builds and approaches a climax; the repetition and rhyming in the thirteenth stanza help to build a driving motion:

She left the web, she left the loom,
She made three paces through the room,
She saw the water-lily bloom,
She saw the helmet and the plume,
She look’d down to Camelot.

As soon as the curse comes upon her, there is a drastic shift in tone. The “east-wind” becomes “stormy,” the “low sky” is “raining, the “pale yellow woods were waning,” and the “broad stream” is “complaining.” The river is then described as a “dim expanse,” and a “glassy” and trance-like mood is created as the Lady “sing[s] her last song.” Her carol is “mournful, holy/ Chanted loudly, chanted lowly,” until “her blood was frozen slowly/ And her eyes were darkened wholly” – a very dark and mournful stanza, befitting her sad death.

Loreena Mckennitt’s rendition of the poem emphasizes its mournful quality; it gives it a slower, sadder, and markedly Celtic rhythm – a more melodic interpretation than might be given when read aloud. However, it is Tennyson’s use of vivid, tone-setting words that create a reflective tone, allowing for such a sad, mournful interpretation.

Response to Lady of Shallot

Tennyson’s "The Lady of Shalott" is overall a very sad poem. The tone, however, starts light, and even cheery. As the poem progresses and as time passes within the poem it becomes more sad and mournful. Tennyson uses different words and creates different pictures throughout the poem to create this shift in the tone.

The first two stanzas just describe the town of Camelot and the area around the island of Shalott. The picture painted in these two stanzas is very bright and cheerful. There are "Long fields of barley and of rye; That clothe the world and meet the sky," and there the "lilies blow," and "Willows whiten, aspens quiver; Little breezes dusk and shiver." It is also a lively scene as "up and down the people go." On the island of Shalott "Four grey walls, and four grey towers, Overlook a space of flowers," where the Lady of Shallot lives. The walls and towers may be grey, but they are surrounded by flowers and by all of the beauty described up to this point in the poem. At first, the Lady of Shalott seems to be more in the midst of all this beauty than locked away from it.

Among more beautiful descriptions, it is revealed in the next two stanzas that she has never been seen and is only known by her singing. In the third stanza the poem asks "But who hath seen her wave her hand? Or at the casement seen her stand? Or is she known in all the land, The Lady of Shalott?" The first part of this stanza still uses beautiful imagery, but we now start to get the idea that there may be more than just the lovely scenery. Still, her song "echoes cheerly" and the reapers call her a "fairy." Everything seems to be happy and peaceful.
The curse and the Lady of Shalott’s condition are revealed in the next two stanzas. However, she weaves "a web with colours gay" and "little other care hath she." The images she sees in her mirror are also cheerful and colorful. There is no real sorrow in the poem yet. The images presented by the poem are beautiful, and the Lady of Shalott seems content and even happy with her lot.

From here time begins to move forward. Tennyson continues to paint beautiful pictures in this poem but the Lady of Shalott’s reaction to these scenes starts to change. The next stanza describes some of the people she sees in her mirror and it mentions the knights riding to Camelot. The second to last line of the stanza states "She hath no loyal Knight and true." Two stanzas earlier she had no real cares. Now she is starting to notice the things that she is missing. The first line of the next stanza assures us that "in her web she still delights," but the images presented in this stanza are more somber. It describes a couple of night scenes, one of which is a funeral. When the Lady of Shalott sees two lovers she states "I am half sick of shadows." She is no longer content with her life.

Sir Lancelot enters this scene and Tennyson describes him as being very bright and shiny. The brightness of Sir Lancelot contrasts sharply with the scene that follows. His description in the poem is immediately followed by a stormy scene and by the curse overtaking the Lady of Shallot. Tennyson’s description of her as she prepares for her final journey and as she drifts down the river towards Camelot has a very mournful tone. She sings a last mournful song as she dies and kills the "sound of royal cheer" when her body enters Camelot.

Through his vivid descriptions and through his use of certain words Tennyson shifts the tone of this poem from the cheerful tone it starts with to the mournful tone it ends with. The song, on the other hand, has a sad mournful tone throughout. It does not make the same shift as the poem.

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Tone Reaction: The Lady of Shallot

Tone Reaction: The Lady of Shallot
The tone of a poem is crucial to properly setting its mood. One of the most important factors affecting the tone of a poem is the place and choice of the words that make up each stanza. Word choice and placement are techniques that force the reader to visualize the poem and imagine the situation in the mind. In addition, this technique also serves to raise distinct feelings about the poem. These feelings that arise from the poem are a direct result of the word choice and the visualization of the poem itself.
The overall tone of this poem is a mixture of both sadness and grief. These two emotions are a direct result of the perceived isolation of the Lady of Shallot. This isolation that reader becomes aware of is due to Tennyson’s word choice and placement. For Example, Tennyson reveals this isolation in the tone of the poem by using phrases such as “Round an island there below, the island of Shallot”. The word below implies that the Lady of Shallot is somewhere faraway from the setting that is referred to; in this case, Camelot. Also, Tennyson stresses her isolation by asking “But Who hath seen her wave her hand...Or is she known to all the land”. This immediately makes the reader aware that this Lady of Shallot is a mysterious figure, and that because of her isolation, not much is known about her. Emotion conveyed through word choice is a powerful tool in creating the poem’s tone. However, another important visualization is done through mentioning certain colors in the poem. The Poem’s tone is directly influenced by what colors are mentioned. For example, Tennyson writes that “four grey walls and four grey towers overlook a space of flowers”. This is crucial to the poem’s tone because there is a sharp contrast in the colors envisioned. From seeing grey walls to a field of flowers, the point is emphasized that the Lady of Shallot has a somber mood because of this direct, sharp comparison in coloring. Furthermore, the sharp change in color supports the idea of the poem that the Lady of Shallot is isolated from the world, by making the reader aware of the distinct differences between where she is, and what she sees. In the musical version of the Lady of Shallot, the tone of the music can more easily convey the somber mood. The actual tune is very calm, but there is a hint of sadness in the music. In addition, the singer’s voice is soothing, yet also sad. Both the textual poem and its musical tune convey the same feelings. However, music is a great method of enhancing the original poem’s mood and tone. A poem’s tone is perhaps the most dynamic part of the poem, and is open to the interpretation of the reader. The author of the poem usually attempts to guide the reader along by the author’s style, word choice, and diction. Ultimately, the tone of the poem is hinted at by using the word choice and placement in relation to other words in the stanza.

Monday, April 17, 2006

Monday's Assignment

Hey Nerdillios:

In class, we discussed Alfred, Lord Tennyson's poem, The Lady of Shalott. We discussed the musical tonation offered by Loreena McKennitt. Your homework is to post, on this blog, a 500 word (5 para) reaction to the use of tone in the poem itself. When possible, compare and contrast the poem to the musical version. Most importantly, use snappy little technical words to convince me that a review of terminology is not worth my time :-)

Also, just a wee little hint...it will be prudent to spend a little time reading about the authors of the poems we read for today...we will be talking about them on Wednesday :-) You might, also, want to think about the various critical approaches used to examine literature. There may be a task involving a grade....hint, hint, hint. Dona Nobis Pacem.

It might be helpful to start reading Augustine, as you will be seeing that on your final exam. While I am generally opposed to exams in English, I am bound by department policy to host a 2 hour exam. The theme will be "didactic ethics."

The last paper will be due on the last day of class. I will try to grade them immediately; however, if you feel that you will likely need revision, you might want to shoot me an earlier edition. Remember, you can either write about poetry or short stories; I am pretty open about the topic, so long as your analysis is completely captivating, original, and well documented. Ery has laid claimed to Jabberwocky, so all y'all will have to pick something else :-)

The Honors showcase is this Thursday. Yikes; that came up fast!!! Since we won't have time to work on our quilts (sooo sad), we will just have to wing it this year :-) I do think some nice pictures of our Pre-Ides of March parade would be suitable, hee hee....

Finally, we talked a bit about either doing a trip to Gettysburg or to the Philadelphia Art Museum. Let me know your preference, and I will do some of my magic here on campus to get transporation and funding. Likely, we can not do both, and we might have to wait until finals week, but, it will be a nice end to a nice semester. We can also celebrate the Italy trippers and send them off in style :-)

As always, if you need anything, just ask :-) No, Potter, you can not just have an A.


Beth, Queen of the Nerds

Friday, April 14, 2006

winny's songs

Praise is what I do: by Shekinah choir

Praise Is What I do, When I wanna be close to you
I lift my hands in Praise
Praise is who I am I will praise him whileI can
I'll bless him at all times

(chorus)
: And I vow to praise you through the good and the bad
I'll praise you wheather happy or sad
I'll Praise you In all that I go through
because praise is what I do
casue I owe it all to you

Verse 2
Praise is what I do even when I'm going through
I've learned to worship you
Though my circumstance doesn't even stand a chance
my praise outweighs my past

(chours)
And I vow to praise you through the good and the bad
I'll praise you wheather happy or sad
I'll praise you In all that I go through
because praise is what I do
Cause I owe it all to you.

Praise is what I do ...........I
ts what I do
Praise is what I do ...........
Its what I do
Prasie is what I do............
Its what I do
prasie is what I do............
Its what I do



My help (comeht from the Lord): by the Brooklyn Tabernacle Choir

I will lift up mine eyes to the hills From whence cometh my help
My help cometh from the Lord
The Lord Which made heaven and earth
He said, He will not suffer thy foot; thy foot to be moved
The Lord Which keepeth thee
He will not slumber nor sleep
For the Lord is thy keeper
The Lord is thy shade
upon thy right hand
Upon thy right hand
For the sun shall not smite thee by day Nor the moon by night
He shall preserve thy soul
Even forever more

CHORUS
My help, My help My help, All of my help Cometh from the Lord

(Repeat)

Thursday, April 13, 2006

NERDaganda

And, a thread for t-shirts and other assorted NERD propaganda.


I like the original idea:

Front: I SURVIVED

Back: Sir Sponsler and the Queen of the NERDS
(in smaller print) -LCCC Honors Scholars 2006-


Or...

Front: nerdicity n [in Courier font]

Back: It's a NERD thing
- LCCC Honors Scholars Class of 2007-





Ideas?

NERDictionary

I suppose this should be the running thread/post for all things related to the compilation of the NERD dictionary.

Terms so far:

Nerdicity
Nerdology
Nerdography
Nerdassador
Nerdassic
Nerdophilia
Nerdophobia
Nerdioscopy
Nerdioecentric
Nerdicious
Nerdetta
Nerdana
Nerdonic
Nerdoscope
Nerdar
Nerdillios (does this imply we're tough-shelled or something?)



Ideas?

Wednesday, April 12, 2006

T-Shirts and Ery's Second Song XD

Hey...remember when we were talking about T-shirts? Anyone seriously interested in that, cause it's definately possible ^_^ Lemme know!

Oh...and for my second song...

Boy was it tough to pick one...but this is the one I ended up with. Make sure you read it carefully before you make fun of it ;-;

Wind by Akeboshi
http://www.lyricsdownload.com/akeboshi-wind-lyrics.html

Now keep this in mind - this is a Japanese artist, and this is his first song in English. So the grammar is a little off and the sentences may not make sense, but if you really think about it, I think it's very profound ^_^ Enjoy! The song itself is pretty, he does sound a little different when he sings too because of his accent...well i think it's adorable >____>;;;

Love, Ery

Class Choice: Wednesday

So, here is the deal:

As some of you know, our case is going to arbitration (this is a really GOOD thing), so I will be on campus for the remainder of the semester (Lord willing and the creek doesn't rise).

On Wednesday, Creed has another commitment and has to cancel class. I could allow our class to remain cancelled and you will have the afternoon off.

Option 2 is to watch the Matrix in class tomorrow.

It is your choice....just email me and let me know your thoughts. If y'all don't show up for class, I will know your answer.

New Terminology:

Nerdioscopy
Nerdioecentric
Nerdicious
Nerdetta
Nerdana

Tuesday, April 11, 2006

Sarah's Songs

I have Dare You To Move by Switchfoot.

http://www.letssingit.com/?/switchfoot-dare-you-to-move-6m8p776.html

and Tiny Pants by Aquabats.

http://www.lyricsstyle.com/t/theaquabats/tinypants.html

The chorus doesn't sound anything like that and it's sung in a realy high-pitched voice. The rest of it almost sounds like Elvis. It's a a realy interesting song.

Nada's Songs!

Right, so, the first one – Cool Considerate Men – is from the awesome musical, 1776. It's a excellent song, and I think it's quite worthy of being analyzed, as it gives an interesting insight into the nature of the men stuck on old traditions in the Second Continental Congress. The story goes that back in '72, Nixon wanted the song cut from the movie, because he thought it mocked him..."to the right, always to the right. Never to the left--forever to the riiight!"

http://www.stlyrics.com/lyrics/1776originalcastrecording/coolcoolconsideratemen.htm


Now, the audio file I have wasn't, er, obtained entirely legally; I took it from the actual DVD. However, it is the only version with Donald Madden singing it; the Broadway version (which can be purchase legally) is sung by someone else, and is nowhere near as good. So, it's on the CD I burned for you, O Esteemed NERD.



Now, I can't help but choose something from Gilbert and Sullivan: Love Unrequited, or sometimes known as "The Nightmare Song." It's brilliantly written, and so terribly British – just check out those lyrics, and keep in mind that this is sung at an incredibly fast rate.

http://math.boisestate.edu/GaS/iolanthe/web_op/iol20.html


Again, I have the mp3 file for this, and it was obtained--almost legally! (I burned it from a library CD) But if you have to obtain it cleanly, make sure to find the John Reed version.

Brenda's Songs

"Satellite" by Anna Nalick
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/annanalick/satellite.html

"Unwell" by Matchbox Twenty
http://www.digitaldreamdoor.com/pages/lyrics/unwell.html

My second song

Disclaimer for Eryka
This song is by an Emo band so do not look just avoid listening to it.


http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/yellowcard/believe.html

The song is about 9/11.



Family Guy

Peter Griffin
"Pictures are better then words because some words are big and hard to understand"

Reposting Greenday

"Good Riddance (Time of Your Life)"
Green Day
Nimrod

http://www.azlyrics.com/g/greenday.html

I had to pick one Green Day song, I am so predictable. Well this song speaks for itself.


Yankees 2-4
156 games left
Road to the 2006 World Series
(They better win tonight)

LCCC
3-2
My stats 0-0 .000 2 Runs scored
Bags of seeds I ate 5 or 6
Next game
Rival game at Northampton

Ery's First Song

I wanted to do atleast one not-so-serious song, so here it is!

Technologic, by Daft-Punk
http://www.lyricsondemand.com/d/daftpunklyrics/technologiclyrics.html

IT's a really cool song, maybe even a little satirical ^,^
It's more like techno-poetry.
It's sung by a little robot who pretty much sums up our lives in terms of the technology we use.
Very interesting.
When I am home I will put the MP3 onto WebCT for you to listen to.
Very cool ^_^
Enjoy!!!!

(>^_^)> <-- A very happy kirby!!! ^,^

Hmmmm...I guess there is a rule about posting song lyrics. Evidently, it is illegal. So, you will have to either use a link or post in WebCT. Sorry, Potter, I had to remove your posts :-(

Monday, April 10, 2006

Lady of Shalott

Click on this link to read and/or print the words to Alfred, Lord Tennyson's poem, The Lady of Shalott

You can listen to the MP3 in WebCT.

The house on Mango street

The house on mango street is about the author's childhood living with her parents. They never really had much. They moved a lot. So now they live in a house on mango street. The children like the fact that now they don't have to share the yard without he people downstairs, or worry about the landlord banging on the ceiling with a broom, they don't have to share the washroom,m or carry water over in empty milk gallons. They don't even have to pay rent anymore . It is their house. The reason they moved from their as apartment was because the house was too old. It had broken water pipes and the landlord would not fix them. So they had no choice but to evacuate the place. They were so glad when they heard they were moving into a house, a real house. One with stairs inside, a basement, and at least 3 washrooms, a big yard, and grass. But when they arrived at this new house, it wasn't as they had dreamed it up to be. It was small and red, with small steps, there was no front yard, and it is build between two buildings. It also has only one washroom, and everyone has to share the bedroom. The house really looked bad. One day a nun from the school say her playing outside and asked her where she lived, and she pointed to her house. And the way the nun said "You live there?" made her feel like nothing. She knew she had to have a real house, one that she could point to and be proud to say she lives there. But, for the time being, mama says its only temporary, but she knows how these things go.

I think this story this story in a way could be correlative to the American dream. Have the great paying job, have your 2.5 children, live in your dream house, and have the yard, the dog, and well, u get the picture. But this story represent us the greater portion of people- those that are not living this dream. Those who are working hard to make it a reality, and yes sometimes, even though they know it's probably impossible, they still hold on to it. In the story, the narrator knew that even though 'Mama' said that they could still get that dream house, she knew that the probability of getting that dream house is slim to none. I guess, it reminds us that even if we would like to dream big, its also advisable to know our limits, so as to avoid great disappointment when we realize that we cannot make that dream a reality.

Sunday, April 09, 2006

Class Monday

Our trial is now postponed to Wednesday...if we all meet for class Monday, you can have off Wednesday instead. Let me know what you think, and I will be around...we can chat about these texts and map out our poetry section. I have to give y'all a load of terms for poetry (y'know...boring stuff about meter and tone and whatnot). I can do it, or Sir Sponsler can when he subs for me.

Start thinking of a song to include on our Honors CD. You will need to select a song where the WORDS are important (see, like, it is all about the poetry). Tell me the name of it and the performer. You will need to type out the lyrics somewhere in this blog (or provide a link). I will compile everything into a packet, with a CD, and we will talk about the poems.

So, start thinking of your songs. I will be around tomorrow for class, so, if y'all show up, then your bonus day gets moved to Wednesday...if y'all aren't there, Sir Sponsler will host class on Wednesday.

My understanding is that he does not want to meet you in the lounge (that is a NERD thing only, sorry). You will have to go back into the classroom (which classroom were we in? It has been at least two months since we were in it, lol). If it is nice, you might coax him into the great outdoors, but I doubt it :-(

The Prodigal Son

The prodigal son, is about a father, who has 2 sons. The younger son gets tired of waiting to get his share of inheritance from the father, so, he decides to ask for it before it is time for him to receive it. His father accepts, and gives him his share of the inheritance, and the son goes off to a distant land where he squanders his money, using it as he wishes -frivolously that is. After a while, all the wealth he had was all gone. Just in time for a great famine to hit the land. He was so desperate that he decided to look for work in a farm, or such. So he worked as a farm helper, feeding the pigs in the sties. But soon enough, he didn't even have enough food to eat, so he began eating the same food that the pigs ate. But after a while, he remembered, even the servants at his father's house eat better than what he eats with the pigs. He then decided to go back to his father, and humble himself before him, and not return to his previous position as his son, but as a lowly servant. For he had sinned before God and, his father. When his father saw him coming, from afar,his father ran to meet him, and kissed him. He put a ring on his hand, and shoes on his feet, and said that they must have a feast. For his son who was lost, is now found, was dead, butts now alive.
But, when the older son heard this new, he was angry, he was jealous, wondering why is it, that his brother who had disobeyed his father gets a feast, and yet, he had stayed by his father's side since the beginning, but he had not received, any feast of honor. But his father explained to him, that all he has is his, and he needs not to be happy that his brother is alive, and has come back home.


I believe that this story reminds us to have compassion unto one another. After all it's not like the younger son came back proud, and arrogant demanding back his position as his father's son. He came back meek, humbled, willing to be a servant. He learned from his mistakes, and wanted to make amends for what he had done. But the older brother was just too selfish and jealous to be happy for his brother who has now returned. Like Rev. Dr. Said: it was not his (older bro) to forgive him, it was the father whom he had to ask forgiveness form. And if the father could forgive him, why could he? This story could also be a great example on forgiveness. I never really thought about it like that. Well, so far this is my "diddy" on the prodigal son.

Saturday, April 08, 2006

Good Stuff

This stuff is great! Don't forget to go into the comments and respond :-)

Friday, April 07, 2006

Sweat

Zora Neale Hurston, pp. 595-604.


Delia Jones is a black washwoman living in Florida. She is carefully sorting laundry one night when her husband walks in and scares her with his bull whip. She took it for a snake at first; evidently, Delia has a phobia of snakes. Her husband doesn't like the idea of her washing white people's clothes in their house, and he makes various threats at her. That night, Delia forms a resolve not to give in to her husband; she's going to stay in that house and continue with her work.

The two have no peaceful communications with each other for the next week, and Sykes (the husband) makes it known that he is having an affair with a woman, Bertha. One day, Sykes brings home a big, frightening snake, which does not amuse Delia. He is resolved to keep it there, and she resents its presence until she and her husband have a big argument about it. She storms out of the house and returns the next night to a quiet and empty house. She lights a lamp with the last remaining match and sets about sorting her laundry. To her horror, she finds the snake sitting in her hamper. It slithers onto the floor and she runs away, putting out her lamp in the process. Afraid of encountering the snake in the dark, she spends the night in the barn. Just before dawn, Sykes shows up, and fumbles about in the kitchen looking for a match. He discovers the snake in the stove, and jumps back, startled. He runs into the bedroom, and is eventually killed by the rattlesnake in the darkness. All this Delia hears from the barn. She walks to the house and sees him on his hands and knees, pleading for help before he dies.


Again, I'm not entirely sure what to make of this story. It hilights a conflict between a hardworking washerwoman and her unfaithful, overbearing husband. Ironically, he is killed by the very snake that he tried to scare Delia away with; she wins out in the end. Thoughts? What did you think of it, Airik?

Everyday Use ~ Alice Walker

Incase you weren't satisfied with my amazing description on wednesday (bleeeeeeeh >_>) here is the riveting story...AGAIN...

There is a black family: a mother and 2 daughters, Dee and Maggie (Oldest and youngest, respectively). This is a fairly modern story (1970's I think...). The mother comments on how she knows her daughter Dee wishes she was more like the mothers on tv, when in actuality, she's very masculine, thickly built and feels most comfortable with farm labor.

Her daughter Dee moves away from home, leaving Maggie and the mother to live in what is described as a shack. She comes back some years later with Harim-a-barber, her assumed love interest and a new name "Wangeroo", because Dee is a name given to whites, so she chose an African name for herself. As the story progresses, the narrator begins to refer to her as both Dee and Wangeroo, then just Wangeroo.

Eventually, it comes down to why Wangeroo came back - she wants her grandmothers quilts. They are kept in a trunk and Wangeroo thinks that's disgraceful. She wants them to hang her in her house. The mother was originally going to give them to Maggie, who appears to a be a simple-minded child. Wangeroo says she wouldn't know what to do them. She'd probably put them to every-day use and they'd get ruined.

Maggie speaks up for herself and says Wangeroo can have them. She doesn't need the quilts to remember her grandmother. The mother eventually sends Wangeroo away and allows Maggie to have the quilts.

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The story itself was pretty interesting I guess. i liked it because Wangeroo (as so aptly stated by Shady) was a "mean person" and I didn't think she deserved the quilts at all. Also becase Maggie reminds me so much of my best friend I actually caught myself replacing Maggie with her name ^_^

I still think there's an element of different generations of black families coming into conflict. I think that they all represent freed slaves, but different kinds. The quilts, I think, represent slavery and the ties to the past, the injustices shown to the Africans during the slave trade. Wangeroo wants to hang them on the wall for all to see. Almost as if she's proud of them. She wants to the world to know of the injustice; maybe she's hoping to receive something for her suffering? The mother kept them hidden in a trunk. She didn't want to bring them out or really think about them. She locked them away. And finally, Maggie, wants to put them to everyday use. She wants to USE them to help her in life. That's why I think, the mother ultimately gives the quilts to her rather than to Wangeroo - Maggie will better appreciate them as quilts.

So yes, that's what I got out of it. Anyone else? I'm done now >_>




All Hail the Immoral Calvin and Hobbes ------>

HOW TO MAKE A NEW POST!!!!!!!!!! >D

Ok...I figured it out (how to post)

DO NOT JUST GO TO THE BLOG PAGE (nerdicity.blogspot.com) TO MAKE A NEW POST! THAT'S USEFUL ONLY ONLY ONLY FOR COMMENTS!

In order to make a new post, you have to SIGN IN on the homepage. Blogger.com

Once you sign in, click Nerdicity. You'll get to the posting page and on the left you'll see a navy blue button that says CREATE NEW POST.

You can click the tab then to view the blog, and make comments that way, but this is the only way i found to make a new post.

I will post this on WEB CT too.

Thursday, April 06, 2006

The Fall of the House of Usher

Right, so here's the actual plot summation. ;-)


The story immediately strikes the reader with a sense of dark gloominess in the first sentence: "During the whole of a dull, dark, and soundless day in the autumn of the year, when the clouds hung oppressively low in the heavens, I had been passing alone, on horseback, through a singularly dreary tract of country; and at length found myself, as the shades of the evening drew on, within view of the melancholy house of Usher" (391).


The narrator in the story has journeyed to this dark and mysterious house to spend a few weeks with a boyhood friend, who seems to be experiencing some difficulties in maintaining his sanity. He feels immediately uncomfortable in the house, but tries his best to cheer his friend by reading with him and listening to his musical compositions.


We are briefly introduced to Roderick Usher's sister, his "last and only relative on earth" (395). She is frail and mentally ill, and appears for a moment, leaving a strange impression. Roderick soon tells the narrator that she has died, and makes plans to keep her corpse in a vault for a fortnight (two weeks). She is encoffined, and put away in the vault.


Over the next few days, Roderick suddenly becomes stranger and does not sleep. The narrator too experiences sleeplessness and wanders downstairs one night, to be met by his friend who is claims to be seeing strange apparitions; indeed an "unnatural light of a faintly luminous and distinctly visible gaseous exhalation...hung about and enshrouded the mansion" (401).


The narrator picks up a book in an attempt to soothe his friend. As he is reading, noises described in the book startlingly coincide with noises heard in the house. Roderick frets that he thinks he has buried his sister alive – that he has been haunted by noises heard within the coffin but "dared not speak." At that moment, his bloodied sister bursts through the door and "bore him to the floor a corpse" (404) (she died as she collapsed on him). The narrator flees the house, never to return again.


This was definitely a strange story; it contained much foreshadowing, and Poe did a good job at setting the dark and gloomy atmosphere. I'm not entirely sure I understand it; an insane brother (accidently? why the need to store her in the vault?) buries his crazy sister alive, is bothered by noises he thinks are her's, and she dies on top of him. Perhaps ya'll have thoughts as to what Poe meant to say with this story.

The Lottery

Shirly Jackson pages 262-269

This story is about an old tradition that takes place in a village. No one knows why they still do it or what the original purpose was but they still go on with the tradition. The little boys started by gathering stones and placing them in piles around the village square. The children were the first to assemble in the square. The men came next followed by the women.
The man who ran the lottery was Mr. Summers, who was in charge of the coal business. Mr. Graves helped out, he brought the stool along and overlooked the process. He was the postman.
The box they had was not the original box. It was an old box but not the original. The people of the town were not even sure if it contained pieces of the original box in it. They also changed the tradition by drawing paper slips instead of wood chips. They did this because there were over 300 people in the town.
The lottery began by Mr. Summers and Mr. Graves swearing in then they called up names of each family in the town. The head of the household would come up and draw from the box. They called up all of the households and the head of the house drew a slip of paper. The Hutchinson were the family that won the lottery. Bill drew the slip with a black dot on it. His wife Tessie got angry and try to claim that he did not have enough time to draw the slip he wanted. From here the family came up and then drew a slip each. They each drew a slip and kept it closed until the the whole family drew. Tessie got the slip with a black dot on it. The lottery was over. The town then threw stones at the winner, Tessie. The story ended with the town stoning her to death.

This story is about traditions. The town has a blind belief in a tradition that they know nothing about. The only thing they know is the winner gets stoned to death. They do not know why they do it. There is something wrong when people follow a tradition blindly. They do not understand the significance of it. They also will not accept a change. They will not see what is wrong with it.
There is also law which is the tradition versus family present in this story. The law is that whoever picks the paper with a spot gets stoned teh family is Tessie yelling and protesting her husbands pick.

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Wednesday, April 05, 2006

Henry Gus Bean

Here is an original love letter that my mom found in an antique book she purchased. We think it was written on Valentines Day, 1908, in Memphis, Tennessee.


Misse:

i knoz taint proper to rite a letter wit a valentine but seein as i don’t stand on con ventantiles an dont owe Mr Eddie Ret anything i rite any how.
i seen you on the car one mawning. Bill and me brung a load of cotton seed to town the day before and didnet go back rite way so we war riding on the cars fur sport when i sees you git on. Sus i to bill a sudden like ses i bill this es the gurl fur me. She kin cook my beans and fri my meat fur me ani time an shes purdy too. Bill ses to me sas he, you is sure rite hen. He calls me hen fur short but taint no use seein as she hes a gurman guy hanging around all the time. i aint discouraged as i am a man of iron constitution en dont let difyculties worry me an i sez to bill if she only see me [once] how shell send that other guy packin. Bill knowed how i wus rite.
So i want you to know how i luv you an i kin wate an if you ever git tired of that fat an ugly big dutch man jus sen him [kiting] an drop a line to yours trooley.

Hen. Gus Bean
Helen Ark

P.S. i am lonesome fur you

Dead Men's Path

On pages 475-478

Summary
The story is about a traditional pathway to a burial site that passes through school grounds. This pathway was there for centuries. This pathway connected a native village to their sacred burial grounds. The pathway had a lot of traditions and superstitions. The school is new compared to the pathway. Michael Obi was appointed the new headmaster of the school. He took a tour of it and saw how run down the grounds were. He decided to plants flowers and bushes around the school. One night he saw an old women walk across the flower patch in the school yard. The next day he goes to one of the teachers and asks why they allowed that. He gave him a history of the people and the burial grounds. He also explained how they tried to close it before but there was a big argument so they left it open. Mr. Obi decided to close it. He built a fence around it. The head priest of the natives goes to talk to him to try to reopen the pathway but Mr. Obi says no. Two days later after a death in the village the new headmaster awake to find his school in ruin. The supervisor came to inspect the school and when he saw the condition of the school he fired the headmaster.

Again the theme of old versus new is introduced in this story. The old is the natives and the pathway and the new is the school and the headmaster. The school is trying to educate the people of the area that the old superstitions are wrong including the ones about the pathway. The natives are not able to cope with this. They destroy the new so they can keep the old. The old traditions won here. I think the author is trying to show how even though we may learn that our traditions and culture might not be correct we must recognize it. We cannot forget or destroy the past to move on.


Monty Python and the Holy Grail

"What tis your name?!"
"It is Arthur King of the Britains"
"What tis your quest?!"
"To seek the Holy Grail"
"What tis the air speed velocity of an unladen swallow?!"
"What do you mean, African or European swallow?"
"What I don't know that, AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"
"How do you know so much about swallows?"
"Well you have to know things as a king you know."

Harrison Bergeron

First thing Kurt Vonnegut is the man.

The cited pages 242-247

Well anyway, Harrison Bergeron is an interesting story based on the future. Society has just figured out a way to make everyone equal. They place ugly masks over all the beautiful people, place weights on the strong people and placed an electronic buzzer in the ears of intelligent people. Their were laws prohibitting people from speaking in a good manner too. Though all these things were visible or could be acknowledged as force everyone in a simple manner was equal.
There was a couple watching the television, the women did not have any extra equipement to make her equal and the husband had a buzzer that would sound off in his ear every 20 seconds, and weights on his body. They were watching ballerinas when an important news announcement came on. A man who was abnormal, he was stronger, smarter and prettier then most of society and considered dangerous escaped from the jail. He was the couples son. He breaks into the news room and proclaims himself emperor and rebels against the new society. He then takes the ballerina with a hideos mask and weights as his emperess. They rip off all the weights and the mask and dance. They defy the laws of gravity. Then the women on the enforcement squad came in and shot them. The couple sat their watching that.
The story ends with the couple forgetting everything that just happened. The wife was crying but due to her low intelligence she forgot why. The husband got a loud noise in his ear to scatter his thoughts and he forgot. So they just forgot and moved on.

Kurt Vonnegut was commenting could be commenting on the educational system. The United States has been lowering standards to make sure that everyone can meet them. This was the extreme example of that. The view of conformity can also be expressed here. This could also be a view of the 1950's how everyone must have the same thing. The houses were the same, the style and everything was the same. It could be viewed that America lost its sense of individuality.

There is the old versus new in this story too. It could be looked at in 2 different ways. The new being the society and the old being Harrison Bergeron. The battle between conformity and individuality. The story concludes with conformity winning. It displays the United States view on conformity. It can also be taken as the new being Harrison Bergeron and the old being society. Coming into the 1960's people began to change and want to become individuals. This story could be seen as the struggle for people to become individuals and losing.


Some BSA Summer Camp Staff Wisdom
"Laziness is the art of catching up with yesterday" Big Nick

Tasks

Hey Wee Nerders:

Just a reminder of the task that has been set out before you. Your job is to communicate (with each other) about the short stories (shorts) you read for round robin. I don't just want ya to blabber on about nothing, however. Your comments should tie back to the texts (and you should reference page numbers as appropriate).

In exchange for profound thoughts, I will absolve you from class on Monday (and the wrath of Sir Sponsler, the Knight of MLA). So, your challenge is to prove to me that you have earned this day off :-)

Dona Nobis Pacem,

Beth, Queen of the NERDS

Fat & Ugly Big Dutch Man

Hey Nada: Post the text here as a post (from the letter....please use original spelling...written in somewhere around 1908 in Memphis, eh?)

heya

hey y'all i finally made it in.

"Story of an Hour" by Kate Chopin is a true piece of feminist literature. Mrs. Mallard's sister reveals to her gently that Mr. Mallard has died in an accident. Mrs. Mallard has a weak heart, so her sister worries about how she will handle the news. After an extended crying session, Mrs. Mallard locks herself in her room and begins to imagine her freedom without her husband--as a free woman. Finally, she emerges from her room, and when she comes down the stairs Mr. Mallard comes in the front door. He never even heard of the accident. Mrs. Mallard collapses, and the doctor ironically announces that "she had died of heart disease--of joy that kills." Ha!Ha! She died because when her husband walked in the door he killed all her dreams of freedom.

Young Goodman Brown

Nathanial Hawthorne. More twisted and interesting stuff ...

Goodman Brown is a young guy in some puritan village -->
He meets the devil and walks with him --> Why? dunno...not really told ^^;; some help here, Shady?
Turns out the whole town is full of pagans and Satanists involved in some weird ritual.

IMPORTANT: there's a line when he sees his wife (Faith) disappear before his eyes during the ritual and he cries out to the sky: "MY FAITH IS GONE!" A very ironic statement, right?? KEEP IT IN MIND! >D

So Yeah...turns out it was all a dream, but it mentally disturbs him for the rest of his life. He loses his faith completely and is a mess emotioinally and mentally. He dies grimmly. Fin.

Edited on Friday:

The story itself was an interesting read. It put a lot of emphasis on appearance vs. reality. To him, everything in his town seemed normal, peaceful and honorable. Until he took a walk with the devil (he actually has a serpent staff) and he is exposed to the great evils that still lurk inside of his fellow villagers. This new knowledge makes him resentful and bitter - angry now that he sees their true selves yet they still continue to live like they are good citizens. Atleast this is what I got from it. Any additional comments Shady?

Love, Ery
"You do not have a soul. You are a soul. You have a body" --- The immortal words of CS LEWIS ---

Happy Endings

Margaret Atwood 497-501

This is a great story that displays that endings to stories and life are all the same. It is not the ending that is important but the beginning and plot.

The summary:
John and Mary meet and get married.

In the first ending they live a happy and prosperous life and then die.

In the second ending John doesnt love Mary. He just uses her. John ends up marrying Madge and Mary commits suicide. John and Madge live on to the first ending.

In the third ending John falls in love with Mary but is married to Madge. John cheats on Madge with Mary. Mary meets James and gets high with him and sleeps with him. John sees this and kills them and commits suicide. Madge meets Fred and get married. They live on to the first ending.

In the fourth ending Fred and Madge live by the shore. A tidal wave destroys the house but they live. They then go on to live on with the first ending.

The fifth ending has Fred dieing and Madge devoting herself to charity and then dieing.

At the end of the story the author displays how all the endings end the same way. John and Mary die.

All the focus that is placed on the ending is not properly placed it should be places on the plot and the begining.



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Law versus Family

In many of the stories we read (and, Antigone, as well) we understand that there is generally a difficulty among generations. How has that surfaced in your stories?

those who walk away from omales

This is a great sotry. I

Fall of the House of User

Poe was a twisted freak! I think he was heavily tormented as a child...

The Yellow Wallpaper >D

Yellow wallpaper...mad weird story man...>_> sent my head on a loop...

Summary:
  • husband/doctor thinks his wife is crazy
  • takes crazy wife to family home to recover
  • wife gets worse and goes crazy over the yellow wallpaper in her room.

The detail used to describe the wallpaper (the color, the smell, etc) is beautiful - it's like you can really see it.

She goes insane by way of - - - she thinks she's a woman whose actually TRAPPED behind the wallpaper. I think her husband faints at the end. Go read it, I suck at reviews... o_o;;;

Love, Ery (Not Yuki) <-- do not ask, embarressing story ^,^;;

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